Y E A R 1 1 A T A R L I T E R A T U R E · M A S T E R C L A S S
THE POET’S TOOLBOX
Every Device That Matters, Taught Through the Romantics
HOW TO USE THIS DECK
Devices Are Levers, Not Labels
WORDS what the poem literally says
DEVICES the choices that shape saying
MEANING the effect on a reader like you
HABIT Spot the choice → name it precisely → argue its effect on meaning. A device with no 'so what' earns nothing.
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FORM & STRUCTURE
7 devices, one habit: SPOT → SAY HOW → SO WHAT
Lyric poem • Ode • Literary ballad • …
TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Lyric poem
She Walks in Beauty — Byron
DEFINITION
A short, musical poem in a single voice, expressing feeling rather than telling a story.
SPOT IT
“walks in beauty”
“like the night”
“She Walks in Beauty” · Byron
She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
WHY IT WORKS
Feeling is compressed into song: short lines, chime-rich rhymes and one sustained mood make the poem behave like music, asking us to share a perception rather than follow a plot.
BIG IDEA What changes when a poem sings instead of tells?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Ode
Ode to a Nightingale — Keats
DEFINITION
An elevated lyric addressed to its subject; long stanzas let a mind think aloud through problem, turn and attempted resolution.
SPOT IT
“viewless wings of Poesy”
“Ode to a Nightingale” · Keats
Away! away! for I will fly to thee,
Not charioted by Bacchus and his pards,
But on the viewless wings of Poesy,
WHY IT WORKS
The ode's expanding stanzas stage thought in motion: wine fails, imagination briefly works, the word 'forlorn' recalls him. We watch a mind argue with itself and lose beautifully.
BIG IDEA Track each escape attempt - where exactly does it collapse?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Literary ballad
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — Coleridge
DEFINITION
A narrative poem imitating folk song: story-driven quatrains rhyming ABCB, often with archaic words and a refrain.
SPOT IT
“stoppeth”
“The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” · Coleridge
It is an ancient Mariner,
And he stoppeth one of three.
WHY IT WORKS
The fake age of the form casts a spell before any content arrives: quatrains march like footsteps, the trimmed fourth line falls like a held breath, and archaism promises an old, terrible wisdom.
BIG IDEA Why make a brand-new 1798 poem feel centuries old?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Sonnet & the volta
Composed upon Westminster Bridge — Wordsworth
DEFINITION
Fourteen lines in a fixed pattern whose built-in turn (volta) forces the thought to pivot - octave to sestet, or couplet slam.
SPOT IT
“Never did sun”
“Composed upon Westminster Bridge” · Wordsworth
Never did sun more beautifully steep
In his first splendour, valley, rock, or hill;
WHY IT WORKS
Eight lines of hushed observation pivot at line nine into personal exclamation. The form guarantees the shift, so the emotion lands as earned, not sudden.
BIG IDEA What exactly triggers the turn - scene, or speaker?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Blank verse
Lines Composed a Few Miles above Tintern Abbey — Wordsworth
DEFINITION
Unrhymed iambic pentameter: the heartbeat of English speech disciplined into poetry.
SPOT IT
“blind man's eye”
“Lines Composed a Few Miles above Tintern Abbey” · Wordsworth
These beauteous forms,
Through a long absence, have not been to me
As is a landscape to a blind man's eye:
WHY IT WORKS
Without rhyme, sentences can outlast lines, tumbling forward like meditation itself - yet the steady five-beat pulse keeps reverie from dissolving into prose.
BIG IDEA Read aloud: where does a sentence outlast its line, and why?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Terza rima
Ode to the West Wind — Shelley
DEFINITION
Interlocking triplets (aba bcb cdc): each section's middle rhyme becomes the next section's frame.
SPOT IT
“Spring”
“Ode to the West Wind” · Shelley
If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?
WHY IT WORKS
The chained rhyme gives the poem no place to rest - each triplet hands momentum to the next like successive gusts, enacting the wind's own drive until the final couplet closes it.
BIG IDEA How does the rhyme chain mimic gusts?
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TOOLBOX · I · FORM & STRUCTURE
Frame narrative
Ozymandias — Shelley
DEFINITION
A story inside a storyteller: we receive events second-hand through a listener or witness.
SPOT IT
“traveller from an antique land”
“Ozymandias” · Shelley
I met a traveller from an antique land,
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
WHY IT WORKS
Two removes from the monument, power arrives already dissolving in retelling. The frame creates ironic distance - we judge what the narrator merely relays.
BIG IDEA Who controls this tale, and what do they leave out?
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SOUND & RHYTHM
7 devices, one habit: SPOT → SAY HOW → SO WHAT
Alliteration • Assonance • Sibilance • …
TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Alliteration
Ozymandias — Shelley
DEFINITION
Repeated initial consonant sounds in nearby words.
SPOT IT
“lone and level”
“Ozymandias” · Shelley
The lone and level sands stretch far away.
WHY IT WORKS
Three l's stretch the line into monotonous emptiness - sound performs meaning as the desert erases everything except its own flatness.
BIG IDEA Say it aloud twice: what does your voice do on 'level'?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Assonance
I wandered lonely as a Cloud — Wordsworth
DEFINITION
Repeated vowel sounds within nearby words.
SPOT IT
“B..e..the l..ke, beneath the trees”
“I wandered lonely as a Cloud” · Wordsworth
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
WHY IT WORKS
Long ee-sounds hush the line into a breeze-like murmur; vowel music does quietly what dancing does visibly.
BIG IDEA Which vowel dominates, and what weather does it suggest?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Sibilance
Ode on a Grecian Urn — Keats
DEFINITION
A hissing cluster of s/sh sounds.
SPOT IT
“silken flanks”
“Ode on a Grecian Urn” · Keats
And all her silken flanks with garlands drest
WHY IT WORKS
The sibilants whisper like fabric moving - we hear garlands brushing heifer-hide, sound becoming touch.
BIG IDEA Whisper this line: what texture appears?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Internal rhyme
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — Coleridge
DEFINITION
Rhyme inside a single line rather than at line-ends.
SPOT IT
“blew”
“flew”
“The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” · Coleridge
The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew,
The furrow followed free;
WHY IT WORKS
Mid-line chimes double the pace - the verse itself catches wind, speed made audible as the ship breaks free.
BIG IDEA Clap the rhythm: where does the line accelerate?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Onomatopoeia
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — Coleridge
DEFINITION
Words whose sound imitates their sense.
SPOT IT
“cracked”
“growled”
“roared”
“The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” · Coleridge
It cracked and growled, and roared and howled,
Like noises in a swound!
WHY IT WORKS
Four animal verbs give the ice a throat: landscape becomes monster, and the reader hears the polar night close in.
BIG IDEA What makes frozen water feel alive here?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Metre & its break
The Tyger — Blake
DEFINITION
The measured beat of stressed/unstressed syllables - and the expressive jolt when it switches.
SPOT IT
“TYger TYger”
“The Tyger” · Blake
Tyger Tyger, burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
WHY IT WORKS
Hammering trochaic feet open on the stress - an anvil rhythm against the iambic norm - so the very beat forges the creature it questions.
BIG IDEA Compare with Tintern Abbey's flow: why does Blake need drums?
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TOOLBOX · II · SOUND & RHYTHM
Caesura
The World Is Too Much with Us — Wordsworth
DEFINITION
A strong pause inside a line, usually punctuated.
SPOT IT
“not.—Great God!”
“The World Is Too Much with Us” · Wordsworth
It moves us not.—Great God! I’d rather be
A Pagan suckled in a creed outworn;
WHY IT WORKS
The dash slams the argument shut and tears straight into prayer-outburst: feeling ruptures the syntax exactly where patience ends.
BIG IDEA Cover the dash and read on - what is lost?
London becomes a wearer of clothes - alive but asleep. The city is only beautiful while it mimics a person at rest; when it wakes, industry returns.
BIG IDEA Why must the city be asleep to be lovely?
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TOOLBOX · III · IMAGE & FIGURE
Pathetic fallacy
Ode to the West Wind — Shelley
DEFINITION
Nature charged with human emotion - weather and landscape feeling with us.
SPOT IT
“grow grey with fear”
“Ode to the West Wind” · Shelley
The sea-blooms and the oozy woods which wear
The sapless foliage of the ocean, know
Thy voice, and suddenly grow grey with fear,
WHY IT WORKS
Even plants dread the wind: fear floods downward through creation, making the speaker's own terror part of a universal response.
BIG IDEA Where does the emotion actually live - in nature, or in him?
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TOOLBOX · III · IMAGE & FIGURE
Apostrophe
Ode to the West Wind — Shelley
DEFINITION
Direct address to an absent thing, force or idea as if it could listen.
SPOT IT
“O wild West Wind”
“Ode to the West Wind” · Shelley
O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn’s being,
WHY IT WORKS
Addressing the wind conjures presence: the poem becomes an incantation, and by speaking TO the wind the speaker hopes to be spoken THROUGH.
BIG IDEA What does the 'O' do that description cannot?
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TOOLBOX · III · IMAGE & FIGURE
Hyperbole
I wandered lonely as a Cloud — Wordsworth
DEFINITION
Deliberate exaggeration for intensity.
SPOT IT
“Ten thousand”
“I wandered lonely as a Cloud” · Wordsworth
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
WHY IT WORKS
Impossible counting conveys impossible joy - accuracy would shrink the moment; excess is the honest measure of delight.
BIG IDEA Why would exact numbers ruin the line?
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TOOLBOX · III · IMAGE & FIGURE
Symbol
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — Coleridge
DEFINITION
A concrete object that gathers meanings beyond itself as the text unfolds.
SPOT IT
“Albatross”
“The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” · Coleridge
Instead of the cross, the Albatross
About my neck was hung.
WHY IT WORKS
Bird, burden, guilt, lesson: the albatross accretes senses until killing one unknowable creature can stand for every irreverence. Symbols demand we weigh, not decode once.
BIG IDEA List three things the bird means by Part VII.
Wine becomes geography and blush at once: sensation overflows its channels exactly as longing overflows discipline - intoxication performed in language.
BIG IDEA Which two senses fuse in each phrase?
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TOOLBOX · III · IMAGE & FIGURE
Paradox & oxymoron
The Tyger — Blake
DEFINITION
Truth expressed through apparent self-contradiction; oxymoron compresses it into two words.
SPOT IT
“fearful symmetry”
“The Tyger” · Blake
What immortal hand or eye,
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
WHY IT WORKS
Beauty and terror share one outline: the contradiction refuses resolution because Blake wants awe, not answers - the reader must hold both at once.
BIG IDEA Find the twin paradox in Kubla Khan's closing image.
The invented voice within the poem - never automatically the author.
SPOT IT
“every Infants cry”
“London” · Blake
In every cry of every Man,
In every Infants cry of fear,
WHY IT WORKS
A prophetic walker, not mild Mr Blake, speaks here - and in Songs, children themselves. Asking WHO is granted sight (and who is denied it) unlocks the Songs' whole design.
BIG IDEA Whose voice do we trust - child, bard, or mariner?
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TOOLBOX · IV · VOICE & TONE
Archaism & register
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner — Coleridge
DEFINITION
Deliberately old-fashioned diction that sets the poem's time-frame and tone.
SPOT IT
“Eftsoons”
“The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” · Coleridge
‘Hold off! unhand me, grey-beard loon!’
Eftsoons his hand dropt he.
WHY IT WORKS
'Eftsoons' drops us outside modern time: register performs enchantment before content confirms it, and the Wedding Guest's slangy protest makes the spell audible by contrast.
BIG IDEA Collect five archaisms - what era do they summon?
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TOOLBOX · IV · VOICE & TONE
Repetition & anaphora
London — Blake
DEFINITION
Recurrent words or openings that accumulate force.
SPOT IT
“In every”
“London” · Blake
In every cry of every Man,
In every Infants cry of fear,
In every voice, in every ban,
WHY IT WORKS
Anaphora turns survey into indictment: each repetition widens the net until no voice in the city escapes it - rhythm itself becomes oppression.
BIG IDEA Count the repetitions: what does the accumulation build?
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TOOLBOX · IV · VOICE & TONE
Rhetorical question
The Tyger — Blake
DEFINITION
A question posed for effect, not answer.
SPOT IT
“Did he”
“The Tyger” · Blake
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?
WHY IT WORKS
Thirteen questions, zero answers: the poem's engine is productive uncertainty. Interrogation enacts negative capability - awe sustained by refusing closure.
Gap between what is said and what is meant (verbal), expected and delivered (situational), or known and told (dramatic).
SPOT IT
“despair!”
“Nothing beside remains”
“Ozymandias” · Shelley
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains.
WHY IT WORKS
All three operate at once: the boast says one thing amid ruins (verbal), command meets sand (situational), the traveller sees what Ozymandias cannot (structural). Empire refutes itself mid-line.
BIG IDEA Label each kind with a line number.
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TOOLBOX · V · MOVES & TURNS
Juxtaposition & contrast
The Lamb / The Tyger (paired) — Blake
DEFINITION
Placing opposites side by side so each defines the other.
SPOT IT
“Lamb”
“Tyger”
“The Lamb / The Tyger (paired)” · Blake
Little Lamb, who made thee?
TygerTyger, burning bright,
WHY IT WORKS
Neither poem completes alone: meekness throws burning into relief, terror deepens tenderness. Blake's 'contraries' require reading the pair as one argument in two voices.
BIG IDEA What does EACH lose when read alone?
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TOOLBOX · V · MOVES & TURNS
Climax → anticlimax
Ozymandias — Shelley
DEFINITION
Building expectation then puncturing it - deflation as device.
SPOT IT
“Nothing beside remains”
“Ozymandias” · Shelley
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains.
WHY IT WORKS
Imperative grandeur is answered within a single line and a half by flat erasure: syntax itself topples the colossus before the desert finishes the job.
BIG IDEA Mark where your voice drops reading this aloud - why there?
Conditional mood confesses failure inside the vision-poem: imagination's limit becomes the subject. The fragment is not damage - it is the point.
BIG IDEA Is the Porlock interruption loss, or marketing?
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TOOLBOX · V · MOVES & TURNS
Allusion
Ode to a Nightingale — Keats
DEFINITION
A pointed reference to myth, scripture or earlier literature.
SPOT IT
“Ruth”
“alien corn”
“Ode to a Nightingale” · Keats
Through the sad heart of Ruth, when, sick for home,
She stood in tears amid the alien corn;
WHY IT WORKS
One name imports an entire scripture of exile and comfort: the nightingale's song joins all homesickness across millennia - allusion is compression plus dignity.
BIG IDEA What arrives with the word 'alien'?
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TOOLBOX · V · MOVES & TURNS
Ambiguity
Ode to a Nightingale — Keats
DEFINITION
Language held open between meanings on purpose.
SPOT IT
“Do I wake or sleep?”
“Ode to a Nightingale” · Keats
Was it a vision, or a waking dream?
Fled is that music:—Do I wake or sleep?
WHY IT WORKS
The ending declines to choose: perception itself is left uncertain, enacting negative capability. Ambiguity here is not vagueness but disciplined openness.
BIG IDEA Argue BOTH readings from evidence in stanza 8.
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SPOT THE DEVICE
six lines, four options, instant feedback
Wordsworth • Blake • Shelley • Keats
QUIZ 1 OF 6
Name the Device
“Ten thousand saw I at a glance,”
— Wordsworth, Daffodils
A. Metaphor
B. Hyperbole
C. Personification
D. Onomatopoeia
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 1 · REVEAL
Answer: Hyperbole
“Ten thousand saw I at a glance,” — Wordsworth, Daffodils
BECAUSE Impossible arithmetic = deliberate exaggeration conveying overwhelming abundance.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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QUIZ 2 OF 6
Name the Device
“And are up-gathered now like sleeping flowers;”
— Wordsworth, The World Is Too Much with Us
A. Simile
B. Irony
C. Caesura
D. Refrain
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 2 · REVEAL
Answer: Simile
“And are up-gathered now like sleeping flowers;” — Wordsworth, The World Is Too Much with Us
BECAUSE 'like' signals simile - winds tamed into sleep image our dulled response to nature.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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QUIZ 3 OF 6
Name the Device
“The mind-forg'd manacles I hear.”
— Blake, London
A. Allusion
B. Sibilance
C. Symbolic metaphor
D. Terza rima
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 3 · REVEAL
Answer: Symbolic metaphor
“The mind-forg'd manacles I hear.” — Blake, London
BECAUSE Chains forged by no state but the mind: metaphor diagnosing internalised oppression.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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QUIZ 4 OF 6
Name the Device
“O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,”
— Shelley, Ode to the West Wind
A. Apostrophe
B. Litotes
C. Ellipsis
D. Assonance
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 4 · REVEAL
Answer: Apostrophe
“O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,” — Shelley, Ode to the West Wind
BECAUSE Direct address to an absent force - the poem's incantation begins.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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QUIZ 5 OF 6
Name the Device
“Did he who made the Lamb make thee?”
— Blake, The Tyger
A. Hyperbole
B. Rhetorical question
C. Onomatopoeia
D. Frame narrative
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 5 · REVEAL
Answer: Rhetorical question
“Did he who made the Lamb make thee?” — Blake, The Tyger
BECAUSE Posed for awe, not answer - productive uncertainty is the point.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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QUIZ 6 OF 6
Name the Device
“'The frost performs its secret ministry'” opens which device-rich mode?”
— Coleridge
A. Sonnet
B. Conversation poem
C. Ballad refrain
D. Petrarchan octave
BIG IDEA Commit before you advance - the reveal is next slide.
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QUIZ 6 · REVEAL
Answer: Conversation poem
“'The frost performs its secret ministry'” opens which device-rich mode?” — Coleridge
BECAUSE Frost at Midnight: quiet blank verse addressed to a listener - scene to meditation to blessing.
BIG IDEA Score yourself: 5+ correct = exam-ready eyes.
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FROM TOOLBOX TO ESSAY
Turn Devices into Marks
The [device] in “[quote]” ([poet]) invites the reader to…
Through [device], X becomes Y, so that…
While [device] suggests A, [second device] complicates it with B…
Had [poet] chosen plain statement here, the loss would be…
STILL FORBIDDEN
◆ "the poet uses alliteration"
◆ listing devices paragraph-by-paragraph
◆ any device without an effect claim
BIG IDEA Device naming is the entry fee - effect analysis is the prize.
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“We are laid asleep
In body, and become a living soul.”